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Monday 26 March 2012

The Earthquake Giant

Earthquake is a giant, It shakes the city. It crumbles buildings, It bounces with all its might. It shocks and terrifies, People scream and hide. Rumbling, Smashing, Destroying, Booming, Striking. Earthquake is a giant. By Louie, Declan, Jack. C, Ethan and Connor

4 comments:

  1. I can see that you guys are really switched on to learning on a Monday morning.....I like it! Jude

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  2. What clever sprogs!
    Connors Dad.

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  3. I am impressed! I love the metaphors and onomatopoeia that you have used in your poem. Keep up the good work.

    Nicola

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