ISP read our Creature Poems and gave us some feedback. You can read what they have said here:
http://year4isp.blogspot.co.nz/2014/05/evaluating-poems-from-our-nz-friends.html
They have also made a movie to introduce themselves:
They would like us to look at the first attempt then evaluate it. Remember to give some ideas of how they can improve the images (pictures), text (words) and sound (music and voice-over) Comment on their blog:
http://year4isp.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi meg from worserbayschool.I love your school it is so cool.
ReplyDeleteHi im betty from worserbay school.Your school sure is big i wish i had a school like that
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