We've been learning to use Poetic Devices to paint vivid pictures in our poems and make our
poems sound good. We know how to make a poem work. We also been keen poets as we explored
the writing process of editing.
We are excited to share our poems to you!
ITCH
Tied to a chair
Burning itch in my nose
Struggling
Frustrating
Wiggling
Don't know what to do
I can't bare this ITCH
ANY LONGER
I leaned forward
Broke my chains
Grabbed my nose
Rubbing
Rubbing
Rubbed
My nose
Ahhhh!
By: Ella Norrington
BANG
I sat in my green kayak
I watched the band of kayaks.
I feel like a bottle cap,
Sitting in a lonely sea.
Suddenly... BANG!
I crashed into the side of the creek.
"Please help! My kayak's stuck"
I said.
And then I heard a tapping sound
I turned around
And Brenna's kayak pound
mine.
I paddled in my green kayak
Paddle, paddle, paddle
Suddenly...BASH!
Oh no, here we go again.
By: Ellie Calder
I remember
Summery sand slipping through my toes.
Waves pushing me down
pushing pushing
pushing me down.
Waves washing wildly into the
wandering wind
Blowing sand
Blowing wind
I remember...
Shining sun on my skin burning
melting my ice cream
drip
Drip
Dripping
By: Grace Harvey
I love the techniques you have all been using to write such wonderful poems, you have obviously worked very hard on these - fantastic!
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