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Dragon blood

People think that dragon’s became extinct in 1732 but they are wrong. Dragons are still alive! A man called Dr Drake found an ice dragon in the North pole in an ice cave and was asleep. He thought most people didn’t believe in dragons so he sliced the dragon’s neck open and got a jar full of blood. The jar full of blood can still be seen at the museum of the strange and wonderful. By Blake

The Crollageister

the crollageister croggles up,

the minith white mountain peaks,

in the lamusting and cold  muck,

and the dained old houses,

where as dead as a claccops gutt.

the crollageister scroffolds,

with a gloominating look,

a dongolded man comes riding,

a man with an ongore hook,

while the devil is lying.

the crollageister strauls deeply,

with an accanounding face,

the tips of his frilk point up,

the bolgles in a pace,

the dragon curls up like a nut.

the men of colonial form,

cover the nimbord land,

they attack at the crack of dawn,

the plone of a monster echoes,

throughout the land until morn.

the infarnota spirit of death,

clammons its wings in the night,

glowing bright conlor red,

and its kalcon cocoon lies silent,

the devil lucifer, is dead.

Ping Pang Pong by Wilbur

On the Ping Pang Pong

Were the mice going flying

And all the people go too

There's a Pang Ping Pong

Where the wings go sing

And all the mums jibber jabber joo

There's a Pong Pang Ping

All the bogs go hoot

And you just can’t catch ‘em when they do

So it Pings Pang Pong

The mice go flying

Pang Ping Pong

Wings go sang

Pang pong pings

Bogs go hoot

What a noisy place to belong

Is the Ping Pang Ping Pang Pong

IF I WERE A  NIGHTMARE    

I WOULD SCARE PEOPLE.

I WOULD CRAWL UNDER A PERSONS BED AND SCARE!

I WOULD LET PEOPLE GO TO DEATH UNTIL THEY DIE.

I WOULD LET PEOPLE HAVE THE SCARIEST, MOST DANGEROUS NIGHTMARE IN THE WHOLE UNIVERSE.

I WOULD LET THEM GO TO A FOREST OF HAZARDOUS DEATH (THE FOREST THAT YOU CAN’T EVER NEVER GET OUT.)

I WOULD CREATE A STORM AND LET PEOPLE GO TO A WORLD OF HAZARDS.  
By Takehisa

I know someone who can…

I know someone who can pick his nose.

I know someone who can laugh so hard it could break down walls.

I know someone who can fly by farting.

I know someone who can change shift.

I know someone who can lick his eyes and that someone is YOU!

By Louis V

DAD

He's a:

Fun story teller

Not sick of fib fever

Great Joke teller

Five decibels yeller

Smelly clothes wearer

Generous pocket money bearer

Nightmare vanisher

Heart heart fixer

Giant hugger

Chocolate sharer

Tear squasher

Loud nosher

Smile  maker

Rugby mad

Fashion awful

Not half bad

I am so glad I had my dad

By Meg

One of our writing foci continues to be on adding imagery to our writing and making sure that we show and not tell. We have been talking about how as authors we can deliberately take a sentence that would be boring and add imagery to make it more interesting and engaging for our audience. Here are some of our boring sentences that we have turned into masterpieces.

I am cold/I was cold.

I was outside in the icy, frozen snow. A coat of frost covered my body. I shivered while my teeth chattered and the white sprinkling gusts began.

Ben

The frosty wind bites through my thick woolen jacket as the rain thunders down, soaking me like a rag.

By Emma C

Goose bumps sprouted on my arms as the frosted air blew against me, and sent chills all through my body. I began to shiver.

By Declan

There I was lost. Stuck. The cold nipped at my fingers. “So this is the South Pole”.

It felt like god’s fridge and I was an ice cube sitting in a ice cube tray. I looked down at my hands. “great’ I groan, “Frostbite!”

By Connor

I like pie.

I sank my teeth into the hot, delicious surface. The grease covering my fingers and lips. Pie!

Rowan

I found something.

As I opened the chest it creaked with a loud screech. The shimmering gold, rubies, jewels and diamonds glistened in the sunlight. A golden tin inside holds a necklace with a pirate skull on it.

By Joab

I stared at the box. It’s encrusted with gems and gold. It looked special. I open it with a scrunch. “Ohhh, it’s got everything. Gold, rubies, diamonds, even pearl necklaces. “I think I’m rich!”.

Felix E