Last week, our Social Positive Purpose Group worked collaboratively with the Year 3 students to create some poetry. The aim was to teach the juniors about the poetic devices that the seniors have been using in their poetry. It was great to collaborate and learn from each other!
When I feel excited
I bounce off the walls
When I feel excited
I explode excitement
When I feel sad
I burst into tears
When I feel sad
I read a book
When I feel sad
I slam the door
When I feel nervous
I freeze into a ball
When I feel nervous
I shiver with scaredness
When I feel hangry
I screamed angrily
When I feel loved
I get happy and my heart bursts
Hearing tui waking me up in the morning
Hearing the teacher talking to my class
Hearing kids and me playing at playtime
Eating toast in the morning
Eating orange for lunch at school
Eating pizza for lunch
Drinking water in the afternoon
Drinking orange juice
Drinking fizzy drinks at home
Smelling pizzas cooking in the oven at lunch
Childhood Tracks by Ethan Gigi and Oli
Anger by Oscar & Charlie
Anger
It flies through our head
like a bullet
Causing happiness to scramble away
Making everyone grumpy
Smelling delicious flowers
Smelling pollen in the flowers
Hearing tui sing loudly
Hearing beautiful getting pollinated by bees
Eating delicious KFC
Eating the burning pizza
Feeling water on your face
Feeling the fresh breeze on my face
Love By Charlotte and Cara
The soul
Love is form of relationship
Flying through the air
as its formed
Love is a red hot heart
Burning through The soul
Hearing my Dad screaming
Hearing my little brother throwing dishes on the ground
Hearing seagulls stomping on the roof
Seeing my neighbours jumping on the trampoline
Seeing seagulls flying past the window
Seeing harakeke bending in the wind
Eating chocolate caramel goody-goody-gumdrop ice-cream
Eating pancakes with chocolate and raspberries
Eating tacos with guacamole and black beans
Hello!
ReplyDeleteI am a graduate student from Washington state and absolutely loved reading your poems. There were so many descriptive words used, and I felt like I got to know the student's personalities through their poems. So many emotions were conveyed through the different poems, it was really amazing!
Thank you for sharing - you are all great writers.